The Uncertain Path
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What People Think |
| Obvious end to a silly story - 09-Feb-08
Darth Depravus |
| This is really the second part to a mini-story started in the last book. I think the whole story was silly and I was glad when the book finished. Now I know that these books are aimed at kids and it is a nice idea to have a story where kids run the place, but I think it is a bit too far fetched in certain areas. Also, I think Jude Watson made the children sound a bit too old. They were all talking like adults rather than children. Something annoying I have noticed in this series is how often people "cry" things out. I'm constantly reading how "he cried out" and "blah blah blah she cried". I think Jude Watson needs a thesaurus. Why can't people exclaimthings or better yet just say things calmly?! The ending to the book was so inevitable almost to the point of being pointless. It is a shame because I like Jude Watson's writing and up to the pervious book, I was really enjoying the series. |
